Talk:Hanamaru Hakata
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Writing
[edit]The writing in this article is very difficult to parse. I don't want the author to feel too bad; I'm not multilingual, and I'm aware that it's tough to capture meaning clearly as a non-native speaker.
It's bad enough, though, that there are passages I wouldn't be able to rewrite, because I can't tell what is meant. 2600:4041:5807:2400:EF31:89E2:6C0A:DC83 (talk) 08:53, 20 July 2023 (UTC)